Wednesday, 21 September 2016

Rona and the Moon! Retold by Jarrod.

Rona and the moon

It was a dark and gloomy night, everyone was asleep suddenly the night was so quiet and Rona was woken by the echo of her children crying because they were thirsty. So She lazily went to the pot of water but there was no water.

When she saw that there was no water she grabbed the pot and  went through the forest to the river. She stumbled along the way because she couldn't see in the darkness. When the moon came out from behind the cloud and peeked from the sky. When she got the water and then the moon went behind a cloud and bumped into a huge tree. She screamed “I hate you big fat moon” “You are a dumb moon.” “I don't like being shouted at,” said the moon.

So the big round moon got the mean,selfish lazy impolite bossy lady and took her far far up into the sky. She held onto a branch but it broke and went up to the moon. She was up there for a long long time.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Jarrod,

    You have done such a good job of using paragraphs in your retelling of your story.

    How did you choose the picture to put in the background of your animation?

    It was fun working with you today. Thanks for telling me about playing rugby with Madi from Pt England!

    From Miss Nalder